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    Tesarik

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    Post by Tesarik Tue May 17, 2016 6:02 pm

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    Magic Name Here: Do No Evil (Torture magic)
    Element Here: Static, Earth, Lightning, and Holy
    Primary/Secondary: Primary
    Character Specific/Non-Character Specific Character Specific - The magic its self was develop by 'Jana Tesarik' as a way to defend her self and to try an learn more about her three states. Little did she realizes she was some how pulling magic power from them and in away making it easier for the others three within her grow more powerful. So the magic its self is interweave between her self and the others in her body almost like its bonded only to the four of them.
    Offensive/Defensive/Supportive/Mixed: Mixed

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    The magic is based on torture that manipulate emotions and illusion of those emotions. Tes is able to toy with others emotions but the draw back is that her own emotions run wild. Emotions: anger, bond, calmness, courage, cowardice, desire, despair, disgust, doubt, envy, fear, guilt, happiness, hatred, hope, love, negative emotion, pleasure, positive emotion, and sadness. With emotion comes unknown power and ability witch can be unlocked over time. Depending on the state of Tes and her emotional state she can be able to gain control of an element. While emotions them self can cause pain so can illusions of them as well. Like you could mess with the emotion of pain but that would only be physical that wont always be seen from the out side. But if one was to create a false feeling of pain you would be able to see it on the out side cause they would then be in what they think is intents pain.

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    Emotion Empowerment
    Tes become either boosts one stat by the power of her own emotions, possibly unlocking abilities related to the affinity and enhancing the existing powers. She also gains control of an element depending on witch state she is in that she can apply to her magic. But only that one element and only when shes in that state and if the one strongest emotion of that state. The emotion that is applied is randomly picked at the beginning of each thread Tes is in and shows though out the thread.

    List of Emotion's

    • Anger - Strength +10%
    • Bond - Weapon damage -10%
    • Calmness - Defend +10%
    • Courage - Speed +10%
    • Cowardice - Evasion -10%
    • Desire - Evasion +10%
    • Despair - Mana reign -2% per 5 posts (cant drop lower then 10%)
    • Disgust - Weapon damage +10%
    • Doubt - Defend -10%
    • Envy - Strength -10%
    • Fear - Speed -10%
    • Guilt - Spell Power -10%
    • Happiness - Max health +10%
    • Hatred - Health reign -2% per 5 posts (cant drop lower then 10%)
    • Hope - Mana reign +2% per 5 posts (cant go higher then 80%)
    • Love - Health reign +2% per 5 posts (cant go higher then 80%)
    • Negative Emotion - Max Mana -10%
    • Pleasure - Spell Power +10%
    • Positive Emotion - Max Mana +10%
    • Sadness - Max health -10%


    List of Elements

    • Normal + Pleasure = Static
    • Deaf + Calmness = Earth
    • Blind + Love = Holy
    • Mute + Anger = Lightning


    Social Cloaking
    Tes instantly assimilate into any society or social group, subconsciously nullifying the ability/need of others to recognize her as nothing else than part of the group/social structure they place themselves. She could walk into a restaurant and immediately assume a position of waiter, or go into a crime organization and assume a the role of domestic servant. Tes can feel the general emotions of a society or group of people by having an internal social mirror.

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    Post by Takai Thu May 19, 2016 8:04 pm

    Hello Tesarik, I'm your friendly staff member here to grade your magic app. I will try to make this as painless as possible. So without further ado *Swings grading scythe* let us being.


    Description


    I enjoyed your magic description but the issue I'm having with it is the description that you put in for your elements. While the static one is more or less the same one that is under the Elemental Guide for this site. The Metal one appears to be granting you several abilities that either need to be turned into perks or spells. Those abilities of which I speak are the following:
    • Users of this element have a natural resistance to heat because of the amount of iron in their bloodstream.
    • Due to the fact that metal is, in fact, the element that users control, they are immune to all forms of metal poisoning
    • Users of this element are generally able to sense the presence of metal in the air as well as in one's body. Although they cannot control the iron in the bloodstream users are generally able to track people and sense their presence due to the metal within their bloodstream. It is an incredibly skillful technique which allows them to see anyone in their surrounding area. It is sometimes referred to as their sixth sense.
    • Users of this element are naturally able to telepathically control things made of at least 40% metallic ions. This includes metal prosthetics and robots, which makes this magic particularly useful against Machias
    These need to be removed from this description. You may turn them into a spell of some kind or a perk but you do not gain these automatically.


    Perks


    As for your perks, these were discussed among the staff and both of them are going to have to be changed. They can be considered spells if you wish to make them into such but they will not be allowed to be perks.


    Strengths / Weaknesses


    The majority of the strength and weaknesses of your magic seem to be the strengths and weaknesses of other's magic not your own. I'm going to have to ask you to change those to reflect your choice of magic not the magic of others.


    Spells


    Name: Iron Whip - This spell needs to gain a duration

    Name: Shaking Aura - This is good

    Name: Zap - this is good

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