Twilight Sky

Name: Twilight Sky
Nickname/Alias: Night Princess
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Birthday: July 10th
Sexual Orientation: straight
Alignment: True Neutral
Race: Human

Personality: Twilight, princess of the night, is a pretty cool person. She may not seem like the most friendliest person at first but after a while, she can be the kindest and nicest person ever. Even when you get to know her she is likely to still keep secrets from you. However if she shows you her kind side, do not lose her trust, or let's just say it isn't a good idea, nope not at all a good idea. Before you get to know her she may seem icy and very easily irritated. Inside she is just like a normal person that is just as sensitive as anyone, just that she's able to hide her emotions better than other people.

People like to associate her personality with the night, she seems cool and dark at first but after you get to know it, it's actually pretty fun and pleasant to be with. However even when you get to know it there will always be a part of it that you will never really understand. She likes to keep herself hidden in the shadows so that only a few notice her. She doesn't really mind being alone, since  she always seems to have something to do.

During battle, she has no mercy she does what she needs to win. She doesn't car if she injures someone, but she doesn't kill unless she has to. She will kill if you did as much a injure her friend. She tends to act abruptly, doing things before she thinks, causing her to do things she regrets. For example attacking someone who is obviously stronger than her, some day this will cost her life. She now tries to think before doing things so she stops making stupid mistakes.



Likes:

• allies - someone she can trust
  
• Night - dark and pleasant
  
• fame - she wants to be known
  

Dislikes:

• Blood- she just thinks its gross, and it both smells and feels weird.
  
• Heat - sweaty and gross
  
• Failure- everyone hates it!
  

Fears:

• death- she doesn't want to die
  
• betrayal- she fears that one day all of the people she trusts will turn against her, then she'd be powerless.
  
• manipulation- she doesn't want to be used for someone to get something
  

Motivations:

• strength- she wants to become the strongest
  
• Fame- she wants to be known
  
• Success- she wants to know how it feels  to succeed
  

Hair: Black, straight
Eyes: brown
Skin: pale
Height: 5" 3
Weight: 85 pounds
Appearance:
Special Characteristics: mostly wears black and white






Guild: Wolf Revenant
Guild Mark Location: Shoulder
Guild Mark Color: black
Rank: D

great app! you got my approval :)

I'm afraid I have to unapprove this app due to multiple reasons. Once you fix them you're good to go again!

First is your alignment. It only says dark which is too broad. I will need you to check the alignment chart right here to aid you.

Second personality, although you meet the word count you repeat a lot of info such as her being very nice.

Her nickname is Night Princess but why is that so. It's because she enjoys walking around at night and she's known to be the most powerful at night, she enjoys the darkness. Even in day time she would walk in darkness, the shadows of buildings. Some say she hates heat, some say she just likes the coolness and mysterious ways of the dark, both are right.

This isn't personality as it includes likes, dislikes and a hidden perk so I ask you to remove this.

Finally the likes/dislikes/fears/motivations section. I see you get the general gist however a few do not explain why she likes this or dislikes that. An example would be this

Blood- disgusts her

This doesn't exactly tell me why she dislikes blood. May you eleborate more? I would also like to point out that a sentence is required per explaination and a few aren't sentences. May you please make those few likes/dislikes/etc sentences?

Quick note, it not required but may you remove the [b][/b.] Code from the app?

Bump when edits have been made~

Bump

She is quite powerful mage, she may not look like the strongest but she is believe me. So when you see her mad, run, run as far away from her as you can, you won't be safe until you get to another universe. So basicly, don't mess with her, or you'll regret it, greatly regret it. So either get on her good side or just avoid her altogether.

This isn't personallity but rather fluff. Please replace this.

bumps

Approved I guess.....